so here is a paper i wrote for literature of foods. its pretty good, i think at least.

Thomas Kvamme
Literature of Foods
Jones
MC #769








Why an Apple?
 












            At some
point in our lives we have all seen a visual portrayal of the story of Adam,
Eve, and the Fruit. When we picture this story what does the fruit look like -
an apple. Why does everyone depict the fruit as an apple? Are there hints in
the bible that link it to a specific fruit?
            When
approaching this topic, first we need to see what the Bible has to say. Genesis
3 tells us of “the fall of man.” When we first read of the forbidden fruit in
verse 2, we learn that the fruit grows on trees, specifically the tree in the
middle of the garden. I don’t know what type of tree that was. The fact that
the tree is in the middle does not help specify what fruit the fruit was.
However, the fact that it is on a tree does narrow the possibilities. Now we
have eliminated things that grow on a bush or a vine, such as berries, grapes,
and watermelons.
            Verse 6
says that the fruit is “good for food and pleasing to the eye, and also
desirable for gaining wisdom.” So we know the fruit was good looking. I have
seen some ugly fruit, smashed bananas and that sort of thing, but I have never
thought of a particular kind of fruit being unsightly. You will never hear me
say “I don’t eat oranges because they are hideous.” Perhaps the fact that it is
“desirable for gaining wisdom” can narrow our search. Every time you see an
infomercial for a juicer they talk about the positive effects that fruits can
have on your mental astuteness.
            The main
way I know fruit affects brain activity is the antioxidants. Antioxidants make
the brain run more efficiently. Perhaps the fruit in Genesis was high in
antioxidants. According to www.newstarget.com the fruits highest in
antioxidants are blueberries and blackberries. They however are not on a tree.
The highest antioxidant level (per serving) in a fruit that is on a tree is a
Red Delicious apple, followed closely by a Granny Smith apple. Perhaps the pictures
we always see of Eve holding a shiny red apple have some scientific basis. Then
again some of the images are paintings going back to the period of the
renaissance. I don’t think they had knowledge of antioxidants and their
benefits back then, even if they did I doubt they had the ability to measure
them.
            After all
of this thinking on why the apple is how the fruit is pictured I can only think
of one reason. It’s the same reason I draw people from behind and not the
front. It’s easier. I can’t draw faces well, but I sure can draw the back of
someone’s head, so that’s what I do. My theory is that whoever made the first
famous depiction of the fruit was great at drawing apples, maybe even awful at
drawing bananas. Everyone after that kept the tradition and kept Eve holding an
apple.




thats it. it had to be 300-500 words. i think it is exactly 500... i had to cut it down from like 534 or something...

In God's Hands,
thomas kvamme

16 comments:

  1. great paper Thomas. A++ for sure.Guess what? I don't have school today! Yay!

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  2. i wish i could write as good as you.i hate writing my papers for 1877columbus is stupidi am thankfulraechel

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  3. Great paper. Remember that part yesterday when you told me you commented on my xanga? well, you didn't. I don't have school today.Sam

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  4. Why doesn't anybody have school and I still do?  I liked the paper.  I think another reason is that the color red is more pleasing to the eye than any other color.  But that could depend on personal preference.  But if you get into how color affects mood, red makes you want to eat.  So that could have had an impact about why it could have been an apple.  Purple is the color of creativity.

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  5. you know, the yellow is very hard to read
    fly away

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  6. An interesting point of view. I give you a C-. It's just not up to Mr. Costello's standards.
    Anyway, I know I am certainly "awful at drawing bananas."
    I'd do a bibliography for that but I don't want to.

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  7. Oh, and sorry to break it to you, but breakfasts are 25 cents now.

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  8. That was a most enjoyable paper and I feel that I have been enlightened. Thank you Thomas. Andy

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  9. i had school today, caroline, but i did get to sleep in (no period A because my teacher didn't have school on time) and i got to go home at 2 o'clock.  it was wicked sweet.
    hey thomas, how's it going?  good writing, no points, though. better luck next time.
    wierd noise

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  10. you are missed at SLT your paper sounds good...
    kim

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  11. although i am not positive on the specifics of who u r... i most impressed by your story. congratsGod blessdavid

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  12. I was not very thankful this weekend...but my brother sure was. he revised a biblical story to fit his thankfulness, "let my poopy go." that is the new version for the exodus. anyway i think they chose and apple because it is easy to eat, you don't have to peel it like bananas and oranges.

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  13. That is one of the best papers I have ever read. I must say it is the first thing that I have seen that compares to my paper on rabbits.

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  14. Thomas!!
             I hope you know that you were instrumental in convincing me to get one of these Xanga's. :) You can take at least 59% of the credit. hehe Come home for the Staff Reunion, and I will put you first on the list for backrubs. Take care Mr. Kvamme. ~the cook

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  15. yeah, it was a pretty good paper. I'd give you an A, but still no eprops. It didn't move me. If it were a forbidden fruit, then it probably wouldn't be around today. I'm pretty sure, actually, that it's all hidden with the garden and the angel and the sword and all that. After all, it was forbidden. You don't hear about people picking apples in the garden of eden. That's a forbidden place. But still, it did give them some of the knowledge of God -- the knowledge of good and evil. They then saw that they were naked, and figured it was shameful to be uncovered. Today, we still think that. At least I do. So maybe we all have that same knowledge and God figured, "what the heck, might as well put them forbidden fruits into mass circulation." And there they are.how about THEM apples?who thinks MY paper is better?t

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  16. it would be kind of funny if it was 501 words and you got points taken off.God Bless,Brady

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